lunes, 31 de octubre de 2011

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Descriptive Essay

Outline
Topic: A day in my life   
Introduction: to ride a horse is the best thing ever
I learning to ride a horse
  A Who taught me how to ride a horse?
    1 how was it?
  B on the way
    1. Fist time I ride a horse
    2. on the way
  C first stop
    1. Dangerous way
    2. First landscape
II a horse is running
  A. when the horse ran faster  
    1. Auto control
    2. How I managed that moment?
III most beautiful way
   A. second stop
    1 how was it?
    2 what I did?
IV after all
A.    At night  
  1 first disadvantage: cars
  2 second disadvantage: the road  
V Conclusion

A day in my life

To Ride a horse is the best thing ever, it is that kind of experiences that cannot be forgotten.
I have been interested in horses; I admire their colossal bodies, their intelligence and their massive power. I began to learn how to ride a horse when I was at my sister’s ranch, one day my brother-in-law asked me if I would like to ride a horse but in my crazy mind I just could think about falling and lose the control of the horse, then my sister encouraged me and finally I accepted. It was the first time I was on a tremendous animal, the horse I chose was elegant its large neck, its exaggerate muscles and its imposing figure made me respect it, but it was not the reason why I chose the animal, it was its melancholic giant ayes which touched my heart. I was on that animal and I started feeling so nervous, my heart was beating as fat as possible then the horse started walking I thought I would never control my self and the horse. On the way was my sister and my brother-in-law followed me, that road was kind of strange at my right side there was an extensive field full of life and at my left side there were just dried trees, that way seemed not have any end. We needed to stop because we needed to pass through a very dangerous landscape, there was a beautiful lake surrounded of those lines of enormous trees, it was amazing.
I was fascinated with I was seeing, and I think it was the reason why my horse began to move by itself, I was more interested in watching that beautiful landscape, so the horse began to lose the control, but I was involved by the sound of the bird and the trees moved by the soft air running around. When I realized that my horse was moving faster I began to ordered the horse to stop, also I called my sister, I was very scared and I could not thing anything, that moment made been in shock, may be I was exaggerating but I really though that I would fall down then my brother-in-law told me that I needed to control my self, because it I am nervous the horse would be nervous too. I started thinking about other things, like a song or my friends, that method worked because I began to feel more relaxed and when I felt ready I began to shout to the horse and demanded it to stop, then the horse little by little began stopping its trot, I was very proud of me, I could control that imposing animal I get a big grip on my self.
The horse found the control helped by me, I was very excited about it, but suddenly when I saw at the way I could not believe what I was seeing, I was on a paved road, at both sides there were lines of trees, the sun light was faint, the horse was trotting slow, at the end of the road was a exquisite house, that house was kind of American, it was white and elegant, it was the most beautiful sight I could have, based on my experience I demanded the horse star running, it was wonderful to listen the sound of the horse running, it really was like a dream.
When we returned to the ranch, it was at night, it was very dangerous because there were not lights that could shining the road also the way was very strange, there was a possibility that a car could hit us, or fall down in a precipice, but we arrived to the ranch alive. A lot of disadvantages but we could return.
I really enjoy riding a horse, it was one of my best days ever, I would like to have a horse like this and take care of it, because horses are very benevolent if you are benevolent with them. I hope one day can be with the horse again.